http://neilmurton.co.uk/2013/07/blowing-a-kiss-2/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=blowing-a-kiss-2 100 words, or sometimes more Mon, 20 Apr 2015 10:59:55 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.4.2 http://neilmurton.co.uk/2013/07/blowing-a-kiss-2/#comment-242 Blowing A Kiss 3 « I tell stories Fri, 19 Jul 2013 11:50:30 +0000 http://neilmurton.co.uk/?p=360#comment-242 [...] the dark one is here and the middle one is here, and together they show it’s not the action, but the reaction [...] [...] the dark one is here and the middle one is here, and together they show it’s not the action, but the reaction [...]

]]> http://neilmurton.co.uk/2013/07/blowing-a-kiss-2/#comment-232 Hannah Tue, 09 Jul 2013 23:01:04 +0000 http://neilmurton.co.uk/?p=360#comment-232 This version is more effective at communicating a clear message, and the dark atmosphere is done well. I hesitate to say I like it, because it's disturbing reading, particularly as this attitude persists so strongly in the real world, but it tugs at the emotions and triggers thoughts, which is what good writing should do. This version is more effective at communicating a clear message, and the dark atmosphere is done well. I hesitate to say I like it, because it’s disturbing reading, particularly as this attitude persists so strongly in the real world, but it tugs at the emotions and triggers thoughts, which is what good writing should do.

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